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Post by stormwrecker on Aug 2, 2006 22:09:45 GMT -5
Name:stormwrecker Age:10 moons Gender:female Rank:med cat Clan:riverclan Picture(Optional):http://www.creativecollectiblesny.com/dogs-cats/images/catimages/common_cat_gray.jpg Description:gray cat with white chest yellow eyes Personality:so angry,she could blow a storm.peaceful,gentle,loves kits,feirce,vicous,lloyal. History:was an abandoned kit by a farm house,when found,taken in by riverclan and still proving herself to her clans
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Post by Silverstar on Aug 2, 2006 22:15:12 GMT -5
A little short but, ok, we need a med. cat. Accepted. Locking.
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Post by †Crystal*Heart† on Aug 6, 2006 14:16:27 GMT -5
--Everything needs to be at least 4-5 sentences min.-- --This needs to be longer. You could be more discriptive, and you mentioned nothing of the body type. --Needs more to it. What are her likes, dislikes? --This needs to be longer as well. You need to say more about her history. --And you have no codeword or IC.--
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